Here I have been adding more parts to my animation as there were several things that needed to be looked into. I am still working on this so it's not quite yet finalized but is nearly ready to be turned into a full pre-vis.
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Hey Ruth - lots of nice dynamic developments here. Like very much the 'running up the wood shavings' section. Don't quite understand the bit with the saw - it is like an elevator drops down (with you in it?) and then it transforms into the drill-bit? I like it a lot - is that what's going on? I like the scene too when you're reflected in your grandad's glasses; the only observation I'd make is that audiences might need to know that this 'is' your granddad as described by his glasses alone, which they'd only know if they've already seen him earlier. It could be as simple as we see a photograph of him (& you?) in one of the earlier scenes - so a photo on the 'wall' of one of the biscuit tin boxes or similar?
ReplyDeleteThank you :) The part with the saw, hammer and drill bit were aiming to be abstract with the saw turning on and the hammer whacking down taking its place, then rotating to show that it's turned into a drill bit :)
ReplyDeleteIll change up some parts in the saw section to make it clearer and add in a photo of my gdad