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Paur, J. (2016). Watch the Before and After Visual Effects of 20 Scenes from Popular Movies. [image] Available at: https://geektyrant.com/news/watch-the-before-and-after-visual-effects-of-20-scenes-from-popular-movies [Accessed 3 May 2018].
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BrainyQuote. (2018). Steven Spielberg Quotes. [online] Available at: https://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/steven_spielberg_584090 [Accessed 2 May 2018].
Heatherton, E. (2018). Special Effects Quotes - BrainyQuote. [online] BrainyQuote. Available at: https://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/erin_heatherton_659647?src=t_special_effects [Accessed 3 May 2018].
Parkinson, S. (2015). The History of Green Screen - Camberwell Studios. [online] Camberwell Studios. Available at: http://www.camberwellstudios.co.uk/blog/greenscreen/the-history-of-green-screen.html [Accessed 2 May 2018].
Proffitt, K. (2017). Are Visual Effects Ruining Movies? A Look at VFX In an Ever-Changing Industry. [online] ActionVFX. Available at: https://www.actionvfx.com/blog/are-visual-effects-ruining-movies-a-look-at-vfx-in-an-ever-changing-industry [Accessed 2 May 2018].
Bibliography:
BrainyQuote. (2018). Steven Spielberg Quotes. [online] Available at: https://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/steven_spielberg_584090 [Accessed 2 May 2018].
Heatherton, E. (2018). Special Effects Quotes - BrainyQuote. [online] BrainyQuote. Available at: https://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/erin_heatherton_659647?src=t_special_effects [Accessed 3 May 2018].
Parkinson, S. (2015). The History of Green Screen - Camberwell Studios. [online] Camberwell Studios. Available at: http://www.camberwellstudios.co.uk/blog/greenscreen/the-history-of-green-screen.html [Accessed 2 May 2018].
Proffitt, K. (2017). Are Visual Effects Ruining Movies? A Look at VFX In an Ever-Changing Industry. [online] ActionVFX. Available at: https://www.actionvfx.com/blog/are-visual-effects-ruining-movies-a-look-at-vfx-in-an-ever-changing-industry [Accessed 2 May 2018].
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