There's some colour banding issues that can be fixed later on and there have been some rigging issues with one of the characters. However, this should be roughly how the cheering animation will be set out. Lighting will be added later.
Hey Ruth, Looking good so far I do have some notes for you: The middle guy on the right, his right arm feels slightly broken to me, I think that the elbow would be twisted a bit more towards his center. I also think his left hand could bob slightly before it raises up so it doesn't feel so static.
the front row, right guy's hands feel stiff to me, I think they need to rotate out slightly after each clap (try clapping in a slightly more exaggerated way and I think you will see what I mean).
Hey Ruth, Looking good so far I do have some notes for you:
ReplyDeleteThe middle guy on the right, his right arm feels slightly broken to me, I think that the elbow would be twisted a bit more towards his center. I also think his left hand could bob slightly before it raises up so it doesn't feel so static.
the front row, right guy's hands feel stiff to me, I think they need to rotate out slightly after each clap (try clapping in a slightly more exaggerated way and I think you will see what I mean).
It's looking cool so far, keep up the good work!
Thank you! the feedback is great! I will try to update the arm and clapping asap!
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